by James Scott Bell
“…make sure you can 'hear' every character in a distinct voice.”
Common Manuscript Mistakes and the Writers Who Make Them
by Aimee Salter
Includes wordiness, telling, implausibility.
Six Easy Tips for Self-Editing Your Fiction by Kristen Lamb
Includes the "Painful and Alien Movement of Body Parts."
Word Choice: Weak Words by Vicky Burkholder
A chart of words to avoid.